On A Life Insurance Policy - Buying The Beneficiary Position

The fluorescent lights of the law office hummed with a clinical indifference that matched the man sitting across from me. Arthur Vance was eighty-two, possessed a handshake like dry parchment, and held a life insurance policy worth four million dollars.

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